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Rachel W. Thibodeaux's avatar

I especially like the first example..."this water is not for you!"

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Rachel W. Thibodeaux's avatar

I constantly study & stalk great hooks, so this is gold ✨️

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Christos Iliopoulos's avatar

Oh wow, thanks for that! I’m a lifelong songwriter, have a decade of writing business reports with some flair under my belt, and am trying out my hand at prose.

I never cracked the copywriting thing, I sound like a robot starring in a romcom.

Will deploy the above and get back with results!

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